Thursday, 21 March 2013

The Draft


Effects of Technology
Introduction
                Technology is an important part of our daily lives.  From the moment we wake up till we close our eyes, we use technology to fulfil our needs and wants. We use mobile phones to call someone and also as an alarm to wake us up from sleep.  Technology is so necessary that it has become a benchmark between of countries in terms of technological enhancement.  For example, the Japanese they have created a program called as the Strategic Basic Research Programs which aim to stimulate future innovation in science and technology, and create new technologies to meet social and industrial needs (Japan Science and Technology Agency, 2011).  Although technology brought us achievements and advancements, do you know they also have negative effects pinned on them?  There are some negative effects of technology that can be seen through health, social life, and the increase of crime rate.
Body
                The first negative effect of technology is that is not good for our health.  Modern technology is a contributing factor to many types of diseases. Electronic devices especially mobile phones emit certain radiations that are harmful to humans.  Research has been done to identify the possible roles of mobile phones and find other sources of radiofrequency exposure and their connection to cancer risks in human and animals (National Cancer Institute, 2011).  According to Microsoft Tag (2011),over 70 per cent of the world’s population now has mobile phones and 85 per cent of kids owning mobile phones. The increasing  percentage of mobile users is actually shows how difficult it is to prevent humans from diseases.  Advancement in technology also brings the film industry the ability to produce “something new” for their movie-goers.  Lately, film producers produce 3D movies to show more effects.  To enjoy 3D movies, people need to use 3D glasses. But the usage of 3D glasses poses a threat.  3D glasses emit several light rays that can actually affect the eyes.  The eyes could be harmed by watching too much 3D materials as it will cause the eyes to converge when looking at a nearby object and diverge when looking in a distance (Kenny &Keiler, 2010). 
                Besides that, people who spend a lot of time using technology like the Internet, television and video games can increase the likelihood of diseases as a result of not getting enough physical exercise. Being too occupied with social networks or games  will take them away from exercising. As a result, health gets affected due to lack of physical exercise. Besides that, people can suffer from illnesses such as lack of sleep, migraine, and stress. Spending too much time using technology can increase in number of obesity especially among children.  According to the Centre for Disease Control and Prevention (2004), the number of obese children has tripled since 1980.  The major cause of the rising numbers is due to electronic usage.  Lack of physical activities an important factor in the increase of obesity among children.  Studies have shown that children who spend a lot of time watching television and playing video games are at a higher risk of being obese.  The study found that one in three high school youths do not engage in vigorous physical activities. In fact, less than 30 per cent attends daily gym classes (Boyse, 2008). 
                Other than that, technology advancements, though they improve the country’s production through the factories sector,theycan also lead to environmental pollutions that are hazardous to humans. This is caused by the chemical wastes that are flowed out to the river and unfiltered gasses released by factories. The Environmental Pollution Counters (2009) states that those who use contaminated water are prone to dangerous diseases such as diarrhoea and respiratory infections.  Harmful gasses that are released to the atmosphere can also lead to diseases in children such as asthma, eye irritations, and skin problems.
                Secondly, technology can also affect the social lives of people.  Technology changes the way people communicate with one another. People prefer communicating through social networks instead of face-to-face interactions and as a result, personal bonds can no longer exist as people prefer virtual communication.  Making our meaning clear electronically presents extra challenges.  For example, Lickerman (2010) explained Internet acronyms or slangs such as “LOL” and “LMOA” describe laughter, but these are no real substitutes to people’s laughter.  Laughter has real power in lifting our spirits when we are feeling low.  In addition, people can feel isolated because they only have “online” friends.Lickerman (2010), explained we that people may feel that they are communicating effectively with others via the Internet, but too much electronic-relating paradoxically engenders a sense of social isolation.
                Technology also causes poor communication skills among people.  Teenagers are able to express themselves virtually but are unable to do so verbally.  Through technology, people tend to say things without thinking.  This is because the Internet convinces people especially youths to follow the Western philosophy of absolute freedom.  It is therefore a paradise for individual achievements where private life is without obstacles and external interference.  Moreover, without guidance, youths are easily exposed to negative influences by what they see and hear on the television, Internet and radio.  It is because the Internet corrupts people’s minds, influences, and changes people’s moral perspectives and ethical values easily (Ru, 1998).
                Lastly, technologies can also lead to various crimes.  Cyber crimes that violate people’s privacy like hacking are on the rise.  Many websites have been hacked by irresponsible people and caused many important information and data to be lost. According to Lulz Security (2011), the cyber attack on Citibank seized 2000,000 credit card account numbers, customer names and email addresses.  Besides that, people’s private information can be obtained easily with technology.  According to Bethesda (2011), hackers can gain access to user’s names, email addresses and passwords.
                Technology has also enable people to easily share and obtain illegal copies of movies and songs.  There are a lot of websites that offer free downloads.  Hence this will affect the film and music industry.  Rema Ling (2009) explained people are using the Internet to download or upload music files for free via the Internet.  The music and film industry suffer losses yearly due to declining sales.  EMI Records was forced to shut down in March 2009 and Universal Music had to relocate parts of its operation to India. Modern technology also easily spreads rumours easily.  Rumours can provoke people and this can disturb the country’s peace and harmony.
                In conclusion,

Saturday, 16 March 2013

Outline #2

Effects Of Technology
I. Introduction Although technology brought us achievements and advancements, they also have negative effects pinned on them.There are some effects of technology that can be seen through health, social lives and the increase of crime rate.

 II. Body
      A. The first negative effect of technology is that it is bad for health.
           1. Modern technology is a contributing factor to many types of diseases.
               a. Electronic devices especially mobile phones emit certain radiations that are harmful to humans
                   i. According to the National Cancer Institute (2011), researchers have investigated the possible  
                      role of cell phones and other sources of radio frequency exposure and their cancer risks in
                      humans and animals

                b. 3D glasses emit several light rays that can affect the eyes.
                    i. Kenny & Keiler (2010) mentioned of a person affected by the light rays emitted by the usage
                       of a 3D glasses. As a result, his eyes would converge when he looks at a nearby object and
                       diverge when he looks in a distance (Kenny & Keiler, 2010).

           2. People who spend a lot of time using technology like the Internet, television and video games can 
               increase the likelihood of disease as a result not getting enough physical activities
               a. They are too occupied with social networks or games. This can take them away from exercising.  
               b. They can suffer other illnesses like lack of sleep, migraine and stress.
               c. The number of obese children have increased rapidly due to the invention of television.
                   i. According to the Centre for Disease Control and Prevention(2004), the number of obese 
                    children has tripled since 1980. The major cause of the rising numbers is due to electronic  
                    usage.
                  ii. Studies have shown that children who spend a lot of time watching television and playing video
                    games are at a higher risk of being obese. The study found that less than 30% children attend  
                    daily gym classes. Boyse, 2008).

          3. Technology advancements though they improve the country’s production sector, lead to                      
              environmental pollutions that are hazardous to humans beings.
              a. The Environmental Pollution Counters (2009) stated that those who use contaminated water are
                  prone to dangerous diseases such as diarrhoea and respiratory infections.
              b. Harmful gasses that are released to the atmosphere can also lead to diseases in children such as
                  asthma, eye irritations and skin problems.

   B. Technology can also affect social lives.
        1. Technology changes the way people communicate with one another.
            a. People prefer communicating through social networks instead of face-to-face interactions.
            b. Personal bonds can no longer exist as people prefer virtual communication.
                i. Making sure messages reflect their actual meaning presents extra challenges. For example, 
                   Internet acronyms or slangs such as "LOL" and "LMOA" describe laughter, but these are no 
                   real substitutes to people’s laughter. Laughter , has real power in lifting our spirits when we are
                   feeling low(Lickermen A., 2010).
            c. People can feel isolated because they only have “online” friends.
                i. Users may feel we are connecting effectively with others via the Internet, but too much 
                   electronic-relating paradoxically engenders a sense of social isolation(Lickermen A., 2010).

        2. Technology causes poor communication skills.
            a. Teenagers are able to express themselves virtually but are unable to do so verbally.
            b. People tend to say things without thinking.
                i. The Internet convinces people especially youths to follow the Western philosophy of absolute
                   freedom. It is therefore a paradise for individual achievements where private life is without
                   obstacles and external interference (Ru, 1998).

        3. Youths are exposed to negative influences.
            a. Without guidance youths will be influenced by what follow they see on the television, Internet and
                 radio.
                 i. The Internet corrupts people’s minds, influences and changes people’s moral perspectives and
                    ethical values Ru,1998). C. Lastly, technologies can also lead to various crimes.

      1. Cyber crimes that violate people’s privacy like hacking are on the rise.
           a. Many websites have been hacked by irresponsible people and caused important information and
               data to be lost.
               i. According to Lulz Security (2011), the cyber attack on Citibank seized 200,000 credit card
                 account numbers,customer names and email addresses.
            b. People’s private information can be obtained easily with technology.
              i. According to Bethesda (2011), hackers can gain access to user’s names, email addresses and
                 passwords.

       2. Technology has also enable people to easily share and obtain movies and songs.
            a. There are a lot of websites that offer free downloads. Hence,this will affect the film and music 
                industry.
                i. People are using the Internet to download or upload music files for free via the Internet Rema,
                   2009).
            b. The music and film industry suffer losses yearly due to declining sales.
                 i. EMI Records was forced to shut down in March 2009 and Universal Music had to relocate 
                    parts of its operation to India.

      3. Modern technology easily spreads rumours.
          a. Rumours can provoke and this can disturb the country’s peace and harmony.

III. Conclusion.
      While technology may have brought good, its negative effects are apparent.

Wednesday, 13 March 2013

Outline


Effects Of Technology
I.             Introduction
Although technology brought us achievements and advancements, they also have negative effects pinned on them.  There are some effects of technology that can be seen through health, social lives and the increase of crime rate.
II.            Body
                A.            The first negative effect of technology is that it is bad for health.
                                1.            Modern technology is a contributing factor to many types of diseases.
                                                a.            Electronic devices especially mobile phones emit certain radiations                                                          that are harmful to humans human beings.
                                                                i.              According to the National Cancer Institute (2011),                                                                                            researchers have investigated the possible role of cell                                                                                   phones and other sources of radiofrequency exposure and                                                                                 their cancer risks in humans and animals.
                                                b.            3D glasses emit several light rays that can affect the eyes.
                                                                i.              Kenny & Keiler (2010) mentioned of a person affected by                                                                            the light rays emitted by the usage of a 3D glasses. As a                                                                                                 result, his eyes would  converge when he looks at a nearby                                                                         object and diverge when he looks in a distance (Kenny &                                                                    Keiler, 2010).
                                2.            People who spend a lot of time using technology like the Internet, television                                     and video games can increase the likelihood of diseasese as a result of not                                   getting enough physical activities.
                                                a.            They are too occupied with social networks or games. This can take                                                         them away from exercising.
                                                b.            They can suffer other illnesses like lack of sleep, migraine and stress.
                                                c.             The number of obese children have increased rapidly due to the                                                              invention of television.
                                                                i.              According to the Centre for Disease Control and Prevention                                                                        (2004), the number of obese children has tripled since 1980.                                                                       The major cause of the rising numbers is due to electronic                                                                                 usage.
                                                                ii.             Lack of physical activity activities important factor in the                                                                                increase of obesity among childen.  Studies have shown that                                                                      children who spend a lot of time watching television and                                                                               playing video games are at a higher risk of being obese.  The                                                                               study found that one in three high school youth do not                                                                                                 engage in vigorous physical activities.  In fact, less than 30%                                                                         attend daily gym classes.  Sprawling development that                                                                                  discourages physical activity and makes walking and biking                                                                           difficult or dangerous is also a factor (Boyse, 2008).
                                3.            Technology advancements though they improve the country’s production                                          sector, lead to environmental pollutions that are hazardous to humans                                                                 beings.
                                                a.            The Environmental Pollution Counters (2009) states that those who                                                        use contaminated water are prone to dangerous diseases such as                                                           diarrhoea and respiratory infections.
                                                b.            Harmful gasses that are released to the atmosphere can also lead                                                            to diseases in children such as asthma, eye irritations and skin                                                                    problems.
                B.            Technology can also affect social lives.
                                1.            Technology changes the way people communicate with                one another.
                                                a.            People prefer communicating through social networks instead of                                                             face-to-face interactions.
                                                b.            Personal bonds can no longer exist as people prefer virtual                                                                         communication.
                                                                i.              Making sure messages reflect their actual meaning                                                                                         presents extra challenges.  For example, Internet acronyms                                                                       or slangs such as "LOL" and "LMOA" describe laughter, but                                                                             these are no real substitutes to people’s laughter. Laughter ,                                                                      has real power in lifting our spirits when we are feeling                                                                                                 low(Lickermen A., 2010).
                                                c.             People can feel isolated because they only have “online” friends.
                                                                i.              We may feel we are connecting effectively with others via                                                                          the Internet, but too much electronic-relating paradoxically                                                                        engenders a sense of social isolation(Lickermen A., 2010).
                                2.            Technology causes poor communication skills.
                                                a.            Teenagers are able to express themselves virtually but are unable to                                                     do so verbally.
                                                b.            People tend to say things without thinking.
                                                                i.              The Internet convinces people especially youths to follow                                                                           the Western philosophy of absolute freedom. It is therefore                                                                      a paradise for individual achievements where private life is                                                                               without obstacles and external interference (Ru, 1998).  
                                3.            Youths are exposed to negative influences.
                                                a.            Without guidance youths will be influenced by what follow they see                                                       on the television, Internet and radio.
                                                                i.              The Internet corrupts people’s minds, influences and                                                                                    changes people’s moral perspectives and ethical values                                                                                                (Ru,1998).
                C.            Lastly, technologies can also lead to various crimes.
                                1.            Cyber crimes that violate people’s privacy like hacking are on the rise.
                                                a.            Many websites have been hacked by irresponsible people and                                                                                 caused important information and data to be lost.
                                                                i.              According to Lulz Security (2011), the cyber attack on                                                                                      Citibank seized 200,000                 credit card account numbers,                                                                                     customer names and email addresses.
                                                b.            People’s private information can be obtained easily with technology.
                                                                i.              According to Bethesda (2011), hackers can gain access to                                                                              user’s names, email addresses and passwords.
                                2.            Technology has also enable people to easily share and obtain movies and                                            songs.
                                                a.            There are a lot of websites that offer free downloads. Hence,this will                                                     affect the film and music industry.
                                                                i.              People are using the Internet to download or upload music                                                                         files for free via the Internet (Rema Ling, 2009).
                                                b.            The music and film industry suffer losses yearly due to declining                                                                               sales.
                                                                i.              EMI Records was forced to shut down in March 2009 and                                                                              Universal Music had to relocate parts of its operation to                                                                                India.
                                3.            Modern technology easily spreads rumours.
a.            Rumours can provoke and this can disturb the country’s peace and harmony.
III.           Conclusion.
                While technology may have brought good, its negative effects are apparent.

Wednesday, 27 February 2013

My Ideas

Since I liked technology, Iphone, digital items, playstation and many more, I picked topic TECHNOLOGY.


The Effect of Technology

1) Technology is bad for human's health 

2) Technology affect social lives

3) Teenagers can lead to various crimes

Thank you

Wednesday, 20 February 2013

The Jackson's Fan

Hello all!

I am Ahmad Jazli. Everyone call me Doo. I am now 20 years old. I came from Terengganu. My hometowan located near Tasik Kenyir. 

I love to sleep. Can sleep count as hobby? Apart from that, I love Michele Jackson. He is LEGEND! I learn BEL 311 because as a preparation for my MUET. Even it not the right syllabus for MUET. But still can learn from it. 

I expect Miss Hani can guide me to improve my English skilss. Thank you